“She’s on
the bus?” he’s confused. “What’s the
occasion?”
She isn’t
even positive this is her bus until she sees his face half-way back.
“No ride
today?”
“Nope. No rehearsal either.”
He isn’t
even sure how she gets back and forth to school anymore. No one he knows has their license yet.
He catches a
glimpse of the nervous red-head kid a few seats in from of him awkwardly
sliding closer to the window and casually sliding his bag to the floor as she
approaches them. “Is this guy thinking
she’ll sit with him?” Laughable. She
doesn’t even notice.
She drops
everything in her arms into the empty seat available between the two. “Yellow twinkie it is! At least until I find someone to take me
home.” She kneels on the bench backwards
and rests her head on the seat back.
“Whatcha been up to?”
“Nothing
really.”
They
continue this way for the 15 minutes it takes to get to their stop. Same intersection they waited at day after
day in elementary school. She smiles at
this thought.
Bus
stops. They get off. 3 of them.
The nervous red-head kid gets off, too.
She glances at him awkwardly.
“Hi,”
initiates the awkward red-head kid.
“Hi,” she
responds. “Sorry, I never realized you
lived this close.”
“My house is
between stops. You guys were getting
off, so I figured I might as well.”
“What the
fuck?!” he thinks to himself. “This guy
never gets on or off here.” He’s for
sure walking her all the way home today.
He underestimated the red-head.
She knows
why he’s walking her home and not cutting up his own street. Jealous moron.
She passes
up rides home for weeks just to see what happens. She isn’t at all interested
in the red-head but hopes the jealousy will get him to try something for
once. Perhaps one of their
static-charged hugs before he runs up the hill will evolve into something more
interesting?
It doesn’t. She’s humiliated. She takes someone up on their
offer to ride her home.
He’s not
sure where she went.
i like this one. these are really interesting as shorts. do you want them to be longer? because i am digging the current form/genre.
ReplyDeleteNo. I'm keeping them as shorts. One of my favorite books to teach is The House On Mango Street by Cisneros--part of what I love is her staccato style because I tend to think and write in a similar fashion.
ReplyDeleteAnd thanks for liking this one... I still don't think its quite where I want it to be, but I posted it anyway.